A new story


I had intended writing about my collaring for today but I’ve been a bit tied up, not literally unfortunately, and haven’t finished writing about that yet and I want to do the experience justice so I’ve going to save it for next week.

Instead I’ve finished a new story that I’ve been working on for a little while, it’s called Stranger on a Train, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. It’s a long time since I’ve written any fiction stories so please feel free to give critique, it will help me when I write more stories (there’s at least one more in the works!).

If you want to read any of my other fiction stories you can find them all on the stories page.

2 thoughts on “A new story

  1. Paul

    Very nice read. I thought it was brilliantly descriptive (like all your writing) and was very easy to follow.

    The only criticism from a personal point of view is that I felt the story jumped around pretty quickly with timings within the story and it didn’t flow particularly naturally.

    Definitely sense there could be a part two to it?

    If you ever need any inspiration for stories such as a scenario or character I think it’d be interesting to see what you created from people’s initial suggestions. Obviously your time is particularly precious but perhaps worth considering in the future.

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